Blog 8

I definitly want to work on my second long essay more because I think there is more that I can work with to expand it. As per our conference, I'm going to try and be a bit more daring and include more personal stories within the narritive. There needs to me more experiences in the story to make it more personal and possibly more relatable. I'll write the version I would never let anyone read in private, then see what pieces of it I can use in the final draft for the class.